#SoCS #prompt : Stream of consciousness #haiku (brain unedited)

January 7, 2017 by floridaborne

Gentle thunderstorm

patters, glowing in the night.

Nature’s lullaby.

Woke up with this haiku in my head. It’s not the greatest, but this IS stream of consciousness Saturday hosted by Linda Hill and that’s what erupted from my brain unedited.

Didn’t know that “Coat” was the prompt when the haiku came to mind. So here goes…

Welcoming daylight.

Color coated skies kissing

silhouetted hills.

sunrise4u

Category : haiku/tanka, prompts

Tags : haiku/tanka, nature, poetry, prompt, stream of consciousness, writing prompt

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14 thoughts on “#SoCS #prompt : Stream of consciousness #haiku (brain unedited)”

Ritu on January 7, 2017 at 3:31 am said:

Both great haiku!!

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- floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 3:39 am said:
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
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kimberlyannglover on January 7, 2017 at 11:45 am said:

I DISAGREE about the first one not being great. I love it! I felt like I could hear the gentle storm.

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- floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 11:53 am said:
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
  It’s so fascinating to wake up with a haiku streaming through your head and realize there’s rain patting the windows and the diffuse glow of lightning in the distance.
  
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  - kimberlyannglover on January 7, 2017 at 1:52 pm said:
    
    Yes! I have found that my thinking structure has changed since I fell in love with haiku. And everything is more fun. Even standing in line at the supermarket.
    
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    - floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 1:55 pm said:
      
      Do you have days where the words you say start having 5-7-5 syllables, too?
      
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    - kimberlyannglover on January 7, 2017 at 2:56 pm said:
      
      Yes, I do. You “get” me. 🙂
      
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joey on January 7, 2017 at 1:36 pm said:

Nice! 🙂

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- floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 1:50 pm said:
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
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JoAnna on January 7, 2017 at 2:26 pm said:

Lovely. I could take a nap now. 🙂

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- floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 2:33 pm said:
  
  Thanks. 🙂
  
  Enjoy the patter of rain gently stroking your windows.
  
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ellenbest24 on January 7, 2017 at 9:27 pm said:

How I revel in your words the Haiku produces beauty… but I can’t write it myself it feels like punishment when I try.

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- floridaborne on January 7, 2017 at 10:26 pm said:
  
  Thanks for the kind words. 🙂
  
  There are people who can put books together in the right sequence, but I need help with that. I’m happy to know that I can bring a little bit of joy into the world.
  
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Good evening 🐞

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